Monday, December 10, 2012

"Grief"

This the updated and improved story previously known as "Thirteen Ways." It has endured multiple revisions, peer reviews, and hours of tinkering. I hope it has improved. Enjoy!


Grief
By Ariel Custer
            Janice stirs brown sugar into her husband’s oatmeal. She reaches for the small, sealed, shaker of ground peanuts. She bought it for this purpose, remembering his fatal allergy, but cannot bring herself to mix it in. Phantom memories of their happiness in the earlier days halt her hand. She puts the container in her jacket pocket instead.
            Janice sits in the passenger seat as they drive silently to the hospital, he in his doctor’s coat and she in her nurse’s scrubs. She glances at his coffee. She pops the lid of the peanut container in her jacket pocket. It would be easy to drop a few pieces in at the stop sign up ahead. They stop. He looks right. He looks left. The timing couldn’t be more perfect. But she can’t. He is especially careful around cars now – always responsible and attentive. They go.
            They arrive at the hospital and walk through the parking lot toward the doors. They are silent, with three feet of space between them. Enough space for their baby girl. Janice’s blood pressure rises; she can feel her heart pound as she clenches her fists. She feels as though she could strangle him with her bare hands. She steals a glance at him and cannot help but notice the wrinkles around the corners of his eyes and mouth that were not there only four years ago. Those four agonizing years have aged him as much as fifteen years would age any other man. She relaxes her hands with concentrated effort.
            Janice has a bad morning. She checks on her assigned patients and has to correct three nurses-in-training. Some doctor almost kills a patient by prescribing a medication to which he’s allergic. She checks the doctor’s name, but it is not her husband. No, he is much too skilled to make that kind of mistake. Still, his skill wasn’t enough to save their precious Annabelle. She pockets some potassium chloride. She will put it in his leftover spaghetti when they eat lunch.
The ritual of the lunch break began the day they met, nearly 20 years ago. Even after the accident, they continued the ritual. But now they never talk, never make eye contact. They only eat their food in silence, barely acknowledging each other’s presence. Every moment his eyes are not on his food presents an opportunity for the sinister placement of the peanuts. But the accident wasn’t his fault, not really, and Janice can’t forget that fact, no matter how hard she tries. He walks away, unharmed.
            A car accident victim comes in with a broken collarbone and shattered humerus. Janice assists her husband all through emergency surgery. He asks for a scalpel. For a moment she holds it in her tightly closed fist, thinking about plunging it into his heart. She could make his heart bleed like her heart bleeds every day. But the way he said it, with an infinitely tired sigh, and the sheer exhaustion in his face makes her pause. The angry red haze is blinked away from her eyes and pushed from her mind. She hands the scalpel over.
            Another patient. She needs air, needs an escape. All this inner battling has left her breathless and shaky. She switches with another nurse. Before having a quick break, she checks on one of her husband’s patients. He happens to be in the room when she gets there. Janice wants to kick herself, but she decides to check the patient’s vitals anyway. The elderly woman with failing kidneys pats her on the arm – what a good doctor he is; she must love working with him. It is the first time she has seen his eyes all week. His eyes are duller than she remembers. He averts his gaze and quietly leaves the room.
            She must return the potassium chloride before anyone notices. She walks in the room just as the nurse taking inventory asks her if she’s seen it. Janice checks her pockets. Here it is; I thought I would need it. The younger nurse looks suspicious but says nothing. She is blonde with blue eyes; a beautiful girl with a beautiful smile. Like Annabelle. She reaches into her jacket pocket, feeling the peanut container. This time, she thinks. This time I will do it, no matter what he says or does. No matter what I remember.
            She stares at him from across the hallway. She sees the stooped shoulders, the dull gray eyes. She notices the wrinkles again, the white flecks in his hair. She winces at the evidence of the sorrow that has plagued him since that awful day when he backed over their toddler. She can still imagine the frantic crawl beneath the vehicle, his cries, the blood all over his shirt. All she sees is a grieving father, but all she can feel is a motherly ache.
It is five o’clock. Her shift is over. She waits in the lobby. He walks in, looks at her, and they walk out the doors. No words. She does not return his gaze. She cannot. She will follow through this time. No matter what she sees or remembers.
            The silence is heavy in the car as they drive home. Why is it so hard to kill her child’s killer? Why does she not dump the peanuts in his coffee? Why can’t she finally finish him? She mulls over the mystery in her mind, trying to make sense of her conflict of interests. On the one hand, Annabelle deserves justice. On the other, to take that justice would mean destroying the only link Janice still has with Annabelle – her father. The predicament weighs heavier and heavier on her mind and makes Janice feel nauseated.
            When they get home he reheats leftovers and even asks Janice if she wants some, but she isn’t hungry. She goes to her room and changes into her workout clothes. She spends some time in their basement gym. She runs two miles and benches 100 pounds. She can hear him upstairs, watching the news. For a minute she considers going up there, seething and raging, indulging every last animal reaction any mother would have toward the killer of her offspring. She could bash him in the head with a dumbbell. She could drop a bar on his neck. She could pour peanuts all over his head, just in case. His screams would be therapy. But that thought reminds her again of the wailing, mourning, weeping screams that burst from him when he realized Annabelle might be gone. She remembers the way he gripped the bloody body closer to his chest, willing breath into her, shouting for his little girl to come back. Janice remembers the way he yelled for her, telling her to call 911. But it was too late. She runs another mile.
            She finishes her workout and showers. He can hear her in the basement. He knows that she hates him. He hates himself. He wants to talk with her, but her icy stare locks his jaw every time he tries. He could go down there. He stands up from the couch, but his knees and resolve weaken, and he sinks back down. Again. If only he could bring himself to do it. For her sake and even Annabelle’s sake. He has it all set up in the spare bedroom. The rope, the rig, the chair – he would just have to jump. He sighs and closes his eyes, but cannot keep them closed for long. His daughter’s face greets him from the back of his eyelids. Not the bloody face, nor the peaceful face he remembers lying in the casket, but her smiling face; the one that greeted him every day when he came home from work. The images are accompanied by sounds – her ringing laughter, her squeals of delight when they played, her soft and steady breathing when she fell asleep watching sports with him. Those memories keep him going, keep him believing. They keep him from indulging the coward inside him that wants to use the rope. And every day he hopes that one day they give him the strength to reach out to his wife.
             They haven’t shared a room since the accident. When she left, she hoped he would follow her and tell her that they would get through it together. But he didn’t. She moved to the basement, and he stayed upstairs. Now, Janice sits on her bed, leaning forward with her elbows on her knees and her head in her hands. She could go up there. Ask that they talk. Scream and yell all of the things she thinks about him, and then cry in his shoulder all of the tears that claw her throat and fuel her agony. She stands up, but her knees and resolve weaken. Again. She stretches out on the bed, the tears leaking from her eyes, her head buried in her pillow. She remembers moments in their lives: their first date, his proposal, the wedding, Annabelle’s arrival and her four wonderful years of life with them. The years that were so unlike this living death. She doesn’t want it to be like this forever.
            Janice sits up suddenly, swinging her legs over the edge of the bed. She doesn’t want it to be like this forever! She begins to pace across the room. What does she want, then? Divorce? Would that bring peace? She doesn’t really interact with her husband anyway. Their unusual arrangement allowed them privacy while they grieved their loss, but now it is just the way they live. She stops pacing when it occurs to her that neither she nor he separated their joint bank accounts. Is that proof of some subconscious desire to remain together? Even in the hellish throes of her grief and pain and utter misery, Janice never wanted to leave him. He is what connects her to Annabelle. No, divorce would only leave her deeper in the black muck of grief.
            Okay, so not divorce and not…whatever this is. Janice’s knees tremble when she realizes the only option left. She has to go up there. She has to talk with him. For Annabelle.
            He hears the stairs creak. He slowly rises from the couch and turns to face the figure rising up from the basement. When she finally steps from the last step to the ground floor, she raises her gaze from the carpet to his face.
            “Charles. I’m ready to talk.”
            

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